Writing

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This this week for writing we had to create a narrative piece of writing about a prompt our teacher gave us. The prompt was a photo of a bird dreaming. the teacher gave us questions that we're to answer in the story. What was the bird dreaming about? What feelings did the bird have? and more. Here is my piece of writing: 

Bird Dreams


As the bird closes his eyes he begins to dream that one day he would grow up to become a big eagle flying through white fluffy clouds. Since he was a baby the little canary wanted to be an eagle, but he was trapped in his little bird cage and there was no way to get out. Day after day his owner did the same routine and fed him the same food.


Then one day his owner wasn't here and a little boy came to feed the little canary and shut the door. The little canary thought something was wrong, the door didn’t look latched. He was intrigued to discover what was beyond the cage. So he bumped his head into the cage door and the door flung open. He was now free to go wherever he wanted to fly.


The first thing he wanted to do was soar through the white fluffy clouds just like the eagle he always wanted to be. He found a way out of the smallest window in the apartment which was above the toilet. Then he flew high above the rooftops taking in the fresh air. He followed this amazing scent to the park where he found pigeons. He always hated pigeons. They used to annoy him through the window when he was little, trapped in his cage. How could he get back to the safety of his home caught and bullied by mean pigeons.


The little canary thought there was no way back and just to surrender. He closed his eyes and remembered his dream of flying high in the clouds like an eagle. So he flew up into the clouds and the pigeons chased him, they were right on his tail when he zig zagged through a cloud and lost one of the weird pigeons. Two left. He flew up then straight down under a cloud and lost another one. One more to lose. He navigated the clouds and trees making his way back home. The little canary squeezed into the toilet window and because the pigeon was fat it couldn't get through the gap and the little canary was safe back home.


With his heartbeat racing he flew into his cage feeling safe away from danger. He thought about the big wide world and decided he was safe here in his little cage. He closed his eyes and remembered the dream one more time thinking he doesn’t have to be big to have a great life. The End


By Caleb