Narrative Writing

 W.A.L.T edit and re-craft our narrative writing.

This we started a piece of narrative writing. We started off  by making a plan and organising the paragraphs. Then we started writing out introduction and introducing the problem to the story. After that we finished writing about the problem and finished writing resolution. Here is my Story:

The Creepy Jog

On a cold foggy day I hopped out of my 70’s camper-van and went for a morning jog when I stumbled upon a fox, but this fox didn't run away. I thought to myself, I’ve seen this fox before. I remember the thick golden fur with white spots.

Then I heard a creepy whisper, I looked around and there was no one there. It could only be the fox. I heard that voice again and it was the fox. It sounded like my brother, but my brother died years ago.

The fox suddenly bit my leg and dragged me into a tunnel. The tunnel was dark with cobwebs that hung down from the roof. I sat down and he told me everything, that he was getting hunted by poachers. There were two that had shotguns and dogs that were violent.

That night when the poachers came out to hunt I was ready to protect the frightened fox. The poachers came to find the fox, but the fox wasn’t there, only the police. The police arrested the men for illegal hunting. After that I took the fox home and kept him as a pet… TO BE CONTINUED

I really enjoy writing narratives because I get to use my imagination to write a cool and interesting story. Next time I could improve on is writing more descriptively and using descriptive vocabulary to make my writing more interesting.

Have you written narrative before ?